Aditya Mudbhary

Death Fear It Not

As thine wake up to the winter misty morning,
With no sunlight,
Bright colorful flowers or the chirping birds singing their song,
The Feeling of death lurks within thy.

Close to thee, Thy see nothing,
Just fog and the gloomy atmosphere sing,
A close friend of old age comes and pays a visit to your fable feelings,
Although I tell thee, There is no need to be afraid.

Death makes angel's of us all,
And leads us a path of a new crawl,
Indifferent forms, Yes I tell thee,
But that's how nature works and that's how it wants to see.

Poem Submitted: Monday, September 28, 2009
Poem Edited: Monday, July 4, 2011

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  • Khaldun Atum (11/24/2010 10:50:00 PM)

    Expression is very clear and well written. Good work

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  • C N Prem KumarC N Prem Kumar (11/21/2010 8:06:00 AM)

    Poem with clarity and clear feelings. Nice work.

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  • Fadwa GmidenFadwa Gmiden (11/19/2010 2:55:00 PM)

    yeah death is a right to people everyone has the right to die
    the real question is did you benefit your life as much as you can during you life
    i love it it makes death easy witch is to me ;)

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  • Veronica Gonya (11/17/2010 7:02:00 AM)

    you make it sound so easy, but i think what we all scared of is the way to die but not death itself. this is more than a poem, i wud say it's a debate my dear friend. do we all become angels? for the good or bad? mh makes you wonder? no one wants to tempt fate.

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  • Joseph Poewhit (2/1/2010 2:38:00 PM)

    Words to think about.

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  • Winnie Koh (11/1/2009 3:59:00 AM)

    thx for inviting me....^^

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  • Maria ShipkaMaria Shipka (11/1/2009 2:39:00 AM)

    yes! 'The death makes angels of us'...or to the Angels hidden inside us grows the wings...and we can fly! Good idea is hidden in your poem Eddy!

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  • Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (11/1/2009 1:34:00 AM)

    death makes angels of us all...a very different thought...10

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  • Ahmed Abdalla (11/1/2009 1:29:00 AM)

    good lines, well expressed. i like it

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  • Res John BurmanRes John Burman (10/22/2009 8:09:00 AM)

    Hi Eddie. Thanks for the invite. I enjoyed this!

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  • Patrick A. Martin (10/18/2009 12:47:00 AM)

    Hey Eddy I love this. You have yet to learn the less is more principal there are a couple of lines here you could have used it in. the opening stanza needs to be four lies Third line edned at flowers and fourth line is the rest. Eddy yoy'll learn a lot reading poems here and keep writing that's the best teacher.
    Paddy-----10

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  • Cristobal De Armero (10/18/2009 12:15:00 AM)

    loved it, never thought of death that way
    very interesting

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  • Aditya Mudbhary (10/12/2009 11:02:00 AM)

    Well you see you can perceive things in different ways and ways you would like it to be so some people see death through a negative prospective but i think there is so much more to it if you really go deep and the best thing about death is that you never know whats coming. Thats why 'There are things know and things unknown but in between are the Doors' and im really glad Aldo u liked this or found it intresting ;) thx alot for the comment.

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  • Aldo Rino Smiloveux-bell (10/12/2009 9:21:00 AM)

    Interesting. I've always looked upon death as the absence of everything, and winter as a time of sleeping.

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  • Obinna Eruchie (10/7/2009 12:16:00 PM)

    This is wonderful, to advice us that we should count on living a good and happy life before death takes us away.

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  • Adeline FosterAdeline Foster (10/6/2009 11:22:00 AM)

    Thanks for reading and commenting on my poems. Read your poem. You have some truly surprising insight there.
    Adeline

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  • Seema Chowdhury (10/6/2009 11:16:00 AM)

    hi Eddy, welcome to poemhunter site.
    i read your poem. its very nice and thought provoking.
    keep writing its a gift from God Almighty.
    read some of my new poems of 2009 and send your comments too.
    take care

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  • Anthony Feghaly (10/6/2009 10:40:00 AM)

    it was nicely done i really like it keep it going....

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  • Terence Nabbs (10/6/2009 5:09:00 AM)

    I'll remember it unto death

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  • Carol Gall (10/5/2009 12:16:00 PM)

    good poem eddy.........10

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