Deciduous Clouds Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
Deciduous Clouds
The Fall, clad in black-gray
deciduous clouds, the sky
heaves of relief a deep sigh
hailstorm falls in a loud prayer,
the merciless summer retreat
the dust-parched earth greet
as northerly winds gather their fleet
gray leaves fall in a dead sleet.
Wow, beautiful atmosphere between decay and a colourful last retreat from summer. I like the personification used here
My dear friend on ph and reverred poet Rebecca Navarre made a comment on poem titled Deciduous Clouds. "So deeply meaningful! .. With such incredible power and beauty! ... Beyond# Ing! " Thank you Becca. I adore your passion for good poetry.
My dear friend and PoetSusan Williams wrote on 19 August 2023 "top marks---weather is a universal concern among the intelligent and caring hearts". Thank you, Susie
top marks---weather is a universal concern among the intelligent and caring hearts
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I can think about deciduous forests when I imagine the concept of deciduous clouds. Excellent poetry
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Thank you, Dilipji. But this is what the Fall is to me.