Defeated Poem by Andrew Williams

Defeated

Rating: 2.3


A broken bottle beside me
I lay in the gutter
defeated, with glass cutting into my soul
The result of a descent into a deep dark hole
with no escape
every moment i lay still i can hear life leaving my body
soon i shall lie still forevermore
defeated like a wounded animal.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Memories And Hope 31 October 2007

Well written...the pain and the defeat...one can feel it raw in your words. Thanks

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 13 November 2007

Strong poem... I feel like this sometimes.. I like the way you described it.

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Kat , sorrow 04 December 2007

It's Sad and has alot of feel about it, I love it. Love Kat, sorrow :)

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Amie-Lee ...... 13 February 2008

Good work. I'm sure we all that way at some point in our lives. Keep that pen to paper xoxoxoxo

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very good poem, I really Love it! ! ! bye from Em xooxoxoxoxox

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True emotions. Great write. you can hear the words in this poem.

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(: God's Wild Child :) 10 June 2008

this ones good too. but u have to be strong. I'm here if u need someone to talk to. I promise.

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Tyease Collins 11 May 2008

So deep I love it ***Tyease***

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J Baker 30 April 2008

This is really good.

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