A broken bottle beside me
I lay in the gutter
defeated, with glass cutting into my soul
The result of a descent into a deep dark hole
with no escape
every moment i lay still i can hear life leaving my body
soon i shall lie still forevermore
defeated like a wounded animal.
Strong poem... I feel like this sometimes.. I like the way you described it.
It's Sad and has alot of feel about it, I love it. Love Kat, sorrow :)
Good work. I'm sure we all that way at some point in our lives. Keep that pen to paper xoxoxoxo
very good poem, I really Love it! ! ! bye from Em xooxoxoxoxox
True emotions. Great write. you can hear the words in this poem.
this ones good too. but u have to be strong. I'm here if u need someone to talk to. I promise.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well written...the pain and the defeat...one can feel it raw in your words. Thanks