Departure Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

Departure

Rating: 4.8


I see you standing,
there at the Qantas jet.
Next day it will be landing
as if we'd never met.

A cold November gust
expands your summer coat.
And yes, Mother, I must,
I could not go by boat.

You're worried about flying,
remembering the war,
the many mothers crying,
the word from distant shore.

And yet, you're smiling now,
a smile without the tears,
the stoic German Frau
is not what she appears.

So many people board,
your eyes assume command,
a noisy, silly horde
off to a promised land.

The wind combines with ice,
My gesture 'go inside',
a parting son's advice,
a mother's love and pride.

I see your hair, dark brown,
your summer coat, so gray.
Upon your face a frown...
but Mother, I can't stay!

II

The engines revv, a thud is felt
my breath forms cabin dew
upon the window crystals melt,
they've gone, except for you.

I felt your arms, the boyant lift,
the pilot must have known,
and soon above the clouds adrift
was I, who'd never flown.

I swear I saw you from up high,
still standing there so tall.
I knew that you would never cry
until you took my call.

Remember what you said back then?
I rang you from a box,
you said be sure to write me when
I need to mend your socks.

III

When thirteen years had puffed away
you'd changed, and even cried.
'Twas me who knew not what to say,
I showed you my new bride.

You stood there, with your summer coat,
your hair, now pewter gray
and told us all about the boat
that sank in Hamburg Bay.

A wind picked up, as cold as ice,
five children grabbed their Oma.
Inside they went, those little guys,
I smelled Tshibo aroma.

You could, for twenty lousy cents
drink coffee, rich with cream.
At last, inside the trusty Benz
the sequel to a dream.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 24 October 2005

Herbert...this was so very touching. It reminds me of my mother in alot of ways. I really felt so much emotion in this one. Nicely written!

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Ernestine Northover 24 October 2005

This sounds very like my Mother Herbert. Mothers are always Mothers, however old you are! You never grow up in their eyes! Sincerely Ernestine.

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Raynette Eitel 24 October 2005

I loved this right up to the last two or three stanzas. I would have kept it about you and your mother and not brought in the other...you had done such a great job painting the picture about leavetaking and later the reunion with a new bride. I had to wonder about your mother's reaction to a new bride. Thanks for sharing. Raynette

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Mary Nagy 24 October 2005

This is wonderful Herbert. I feel like you've shared such an intimate moment of your life with us, thank you. Sincerely, Mary

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