Depression Poem by Stephan McLean

Depression

Rating: 4.4


I scream but there's no sound,
I cry but there's no tears,
Is this life,
Or am i isolated with emotion.

No one is listening,
I dont think anyone cares,
Is this life,
Or hell with normal people.

I try to act normal,
But no one know's the thoughts inside my head,
My so called life,
Filled with thoughts of being better off dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chrystal Cornish 19 September 2009

I know what you mean it feels like ur the only one but hun your not. Keep writing it helps a little, no matter what people say keep writing. If they don't like it or understand they don't have to read it. If you ever want to talk email me.

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Leeona (XOXOs) Sugakixs 20 September 2009

wow! i know that feeling well enough. you have to dig deeper than your soul will let you and grab hold of that strength and use it. Once you dig that deep there is no comming back. Once you break that barrier you will continue to do deeper. Deeper than an abyss in space. Stay Strong! Lee

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sky dreams 22 September 2009

this poem is filled with very strong emotion.. i think everyone feels this way at least once in their life, some worse off than others of course... just keep going because it will only make you stronger in the end =) good write

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Sayz LFlynn 22 September 2009

brill! ! i know how you feel, but dont worrie the sun will rise.

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Aldo Kraas 24 September 2009

That poem is very good.

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Miss tee 24 December 2011

I can definitely relate - great job

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Chantel Weston 13 October 2009

in depression there is nothing...no sound, feeling, action, nothing...you put it in to words for the rest of us. thank you so much. its truly amazing! !

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Izzy Aubree 28 September 2009

I love this... you express it so well, amazing.

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Patrick McFarland 28 September 2009

I have been there Stephan and found writing to be helpful in settling the racing mind that only those of us who have experienced it understand. A beautiful piece straight from the heart. Keep writing my friend. You've got what it takes.10+++

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Eyan Desir 27 September 2009

I can totally relate to this good write 10......

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