Brandon Adamson

Designer Love - Poem by Brandon Adamson

Very well I contradict myself
knock myself out
looking for a knockout
won't settle for a knockoff
a friendship bracelet
is never enough
in a department store
busy shopping for
I need your
designer love.
immortal while we're shopping

Comments about Designer Love by Brandon Adamson

  • (1/5/2016 6:19:00 PM)

    powerful.I hope it works...... (Report) Reply

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  • Susan Williams (1/5/2016 3:04:00 PM)

    This was playful! Imaginative way to get your point across. Very well written (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (1/5/2016 8:53:00 AM)

    Very well said. We agree with the poet's contention that what is needed is unadulterated love in a relationship. All else is secondary. Following expression is quite eloquent:
    a friendship bracelet
    is never enough
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  • (1/5/2016 6:05:00 AM)

    Wonderful as well as meaningful and demanding muse. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (1/5/2016 5:07:00 AM)

    Cute drop! ! .Nice reading! ! (Report) Reply

  • Abderrahmane Dakir (1/5/2016 5:04:00 AM)

    LOL. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed with it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 29, 2005

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