Shah Surja

Silver Star - 3,112 Points (22/11/1985 / Dhaka)

Desperate - Poem by Shah Surja

Beautiful girl in the rain bouncing on water
Oh bouncing frogs came up from the hole
Bouncing feelings in my heart
Drop-wearing - lots of rain from the sky
I'm going to drop out feelings - Desperate

Topic(s) of this poem: nature


Comments about Desperate by Shah Surja

  • Dorina Neculce (2/8/2016 5:08:00 AM)


    very interesting ideea
    I'm going to drop out feelings
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  • (12/5/2015 4:29:00 PM)


    Beautiful poem..I liked the transition from description of external feats of nature to internal feelings.Thanks for sharing it. (Report) Reply

  • (11/29/2015 9:55:00 PM)


    Brilliantly presented poem... (Report) Reply

    Shah Surja Shah Surja (11/30/2015 5:56:00 PM)

    Thanks

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/24/2015 7:01:00 AM)


    Rain gives enormous beauty to the nature. Wonderful poem shared on nature definitely. Interesting...10 (Report) Reply

    Shah Surja Shah Surja (11/24/2015 7:57:00 AM)

    Thank you dear poet

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 24, 2015



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