Destiny Poem by Vidyadhar Durgekar

Destiny

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Through the doors of suspense he comes,
What is in store, he only knows;
All have to surrender and bow,
To the tribute for deeds what he throws;
All wait to find what he will bestow,
Sometimes blessed in a continuous flow,
Like a Christmas gift in a winter snow;
Whenever he feels confers with mazel tov,
Bringing with it the happiness though,
Sometime escorted with a share of sorrow;
With pain and strain you toil in life’s meadow,
Nature presents fortune with harmony and love;
Thoughts, words and deeds are the seeds we sow,
It is preparation waiting to marry chance, as I know;

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subbaraman N V 16 March 2008

Yes, that is why we pray that let our thoughts, words and deeds be pure and noble! A nice poem and thanks for sharing!

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Malini Kadir 16 March 2008

enjoyed this work of yours...last line especially!

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Raman Savithiri 21 March 2008

Great insight! Even destiny could be molded by pure thoughts and good deeds. Well written Vidhyadhar!

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Indira Renganathan 28 September 2008

A very good destiny of a poem..kindly read my poem 'vidhi' at leisure..thank you

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Poras Sharma 30 March 2008

Its really a wonderful poems, I hope to write like you some day.

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Dear Mr Vidyadhar, It is good poem capable enough to withstand the test of time.. Precision and clarity are better in ' Destiny ' when compared to ' Black Is Beautiful'. Man`s helplessness before certain eventualities has ever been a concern for us...

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K. V. Venkataramana 27 March 2008

A wonderful poem on 'Destiny''. Congrats!

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Rani Turton 27 March 2008

We all have to prepare our destiny and we knows where the seeds will fall? Thoughts that are very aptly expressed.

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