Devoid Of Subtleties Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Devoid Of Subtleties

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I wrote my sentiments into poems,
To express and expound innate thoughts.
It is my fault that I cannot strike the passion,
Of poetic phrases devoid of the subtleties.

I am not a scholarly type of a poet,
Who scribbles poems with a score or rhyme.
I just want to express something in free verse,
A paragraph or two devoid of the subtleties.

Like most of the dreamers who attempted,
I too just grab a pen or click the keyboard;
At the surge of feelings so moved by an urge
To compose a poem devoid of subtleties.

Though somehow my poems seem so cold,
Lacks magic of the classic type of expression;
Yet I thank those who bother to read my writings
Even as they said most are devoid of the subtleties.

Wednesday, October 17, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: rhyme
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jemarie Ragudo 29 October 2007

Cmon! Don't be like that. A lot of people like your style of writing. We can't please everyone, right? Continue to write for I'm one of those who will go on reading your work.

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Raveendran . 19 October 2007

'the surge of feelings so moved by an urge' beautiful poetic utterance

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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