Dialogue With Self: Iii Poem by indira babbellapati

Dialogue With Self: Iii

Rating: 3.4


'who are you? '

'isn't that a stupid question?
don't you know me as indira? '

'are you that? '
'...who told you? '

'come on, that's the limit! '

'...come on, i say!
does the tree know
it's tree?
does the dog know
it's dog?
the list can be endless, you see
why this obsession
for an identity...? '

the voice faded...

08dec2009
05.34hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 07 December 2009

i wish the voice to fade forever; for all, indira.....brilliant poem, dear.....

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Sadiqullah Khan 08 December 2009

Once freed like this what else you want. good one

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Sadiqullah Khan 08 December 2009

Once freed like this what else you want. good one

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Sadiqullah Khan 08 December 2009

Once freed like this what else you want. good one

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Ranjit Ravindran 08 December 2009

Great going.... Good luck for you and your self.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 21 December 2009

a penetrating thought. shan

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I too talk ot myself.. it depends though. i got many names.. personalities.. known know each other. sometimes, im a log, and i dont answer, or ask. i just sit there. :) . like your poem milady

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Sonya Florentino 13 December 2009

love this Indira.....i'm glad to know i'm not the only one having conversations with myself....if you haven't yet, do read my poem 'Doors and Mirrors'

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 December 2009

I think u know the story of Sri Ramana Maharshi of Arunachalam. When he was 12 or 13, he heard of a sage of the hill; went there and knocked the hut's door. Came a voice, Who are you? . He replied 'My name is so and so' Then came the reply, 'Get out'. The next day again Ramana Maharshi went and knocked the door. Came a voice, 'Who are you'. This time Ramana Maharshi gave more details, like his name, father's name, caste, etc. This time even more harshly came the reply 'get out'. Third time when he went, when questioned, Who are you, he answered humbly 'I came here to know that'. Then the saint opened the door and took him inside. What happend later is history.

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Onelia Avelar 10 December 2009

the obsession for an identity - well pointed - you must give an ear to that mystic voice more often... maybe it comes from very far away...

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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