Diamond Mine Poem by Dans Only

Diamond Mine

Rating: 5.0


There is a fire inside
Which consumes all.
A hurting within,
Prelude to the fall.
I love her.
But is she all?
Crying tears of doubt.
Shouting words of pain.
Silence.
Forever after wondering.
Were the tears more important
Than the words?
Never knowing,
But always recalling.
A time crushed by words,
Yet crystallized with tears.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 20 June 2009

ahaaaaaaaaaaa so beautiful those tears that fell--- pearls you droppppppppp lovely A+++ and 10++ anjali

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Myrtle Thomas 24 May 2009

Wonderful I can see and read the love in this and the confusion as well, a great poem thanks

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 11 April 2009

u make it sound so poetic and indeed it is! amazing and marvelous write

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