Did It Happen Again? Poem by Alen Alexander

Did It Happen Again?

Rating: 4.9


i thought it was over
all gone and done
damn, its human nature
again, i've fallen in love

a small little girl
with her cute puppy eyes
with her smile, so sincere that brought me down
i, who was twice her height

is this actually love or affection
this case, how do i describe
these were feelings i never had before
they'll stay, but soon, she will go with time

im always so up and alive,
when im near her
that i was jumpy and warm, while she shivered,
in the chilly december

when my hands met with hers
it was a time, one of a kind
no, sparks didnt come and i didnt get zapped
but that was a time, i wsh would stay longer, or atleast again revived

is this actually love or affection
this case, how do i describe
these were feelings i never had before
they'll stay, but soon, she will go with time

i thank my age
but mourn about it too
cause it was that, that got me near her
but it keeps me away now, this short time was only how much God drew

all i know now is that
spending time with her, is what i love to have
but its too late, she's gone now, not dead & departed
but just home, to be with her mom and her dad

is this actually love or affection
this case, how do i describe
these are feelings i never had before
they stay, but damn, she's gone with time

Copyright © 2009 by Alen Alexander

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 31 July 2009

Written with emotion...each line expresses your feeling well....good work

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 31 July 2009

Your poem is good but why put the 'd' word. It's a bad word.

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Obinna Eruchie 31 July 2009

A wonderful verse well written.

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Thomas Coltrin 30 July 2009

i loved it it was good defiantly a 10, i know the feeling for this is exactly how i feel about my love,

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Toni Bellanger 27 July 2009

wonderful. loved the question, 'is this actually love or affection? '

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Nooruddeen Mm 11 October 2009

Hi teenager, your feeling is very common in your age. You have expressed it properly and nicely Good work Rgds Nooruddeen

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 04 August 2009

that was sweet...with an imagination of a inocent young teenager going into it... good job though u can be more careful with ur choice of words... keep writing...

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Alen Alexander 03 August 2009

Tamara Jay Hanaring said: hey Alen i read your poem..again it hapen and it just cheer me..it was sweet with vivid images and i say it will hasppen again and again..sweet lovely poem..

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Sneha 'The Poetess' 02 August 2009

the story of every teenager your age.......the obvious feelings of love...u expressed it well......dont fret....love will come again....if not 2day..then 2morrow.... ur super amazing.....keep it up...

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dr veenaa rai 01 August 2009

love is a lovely emotion...well written alen

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