Did U Read My Poem? Poem by Melissa Broomhead

Did U Read My Poem?

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Read some of my work i dare u to;
U might just learn a thing or 2:
Weather happy or sad mad or glad i've made it for sure;
A rose here tears there but it's not like many ask for more;
But still i write why do i do it;
But what do u care u rush right through it;
It hurts me so that u dont care;
You'd rather talk or sing or play with your hair;
But yet i forgive u i dont know why;
U made me think, and hurt, and cry;
Foregiveness what a beautiful thing

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 18 August 2006

Wimsical, absolutely lovely, great work Melissa. Melvina

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BEAU GOLDEN 09 July 2006

so playful yet so serious and deep, i cant wait to read more of your work!

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Kee Thampi 23 June 2006

Weather happy or sad mad or glad i've made it for sure; A rose here tears there but it's not like many ask for more; But still i write why do i do it; But what do u care u rush right through it; It hurts you are talented, wish more to write and have one day with crown

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Ezekiel Valdez 22 June 2006

Im sure many read ur poems and learn from them instead of just rushin thru them, great poem

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