Did You Smile? Poem by Lucas P

Did You Smile?

Rating: 5.0


I am asleep;
dreaming of elusive worlds.
I sensed emotions I deemed
were real.
I saw a memory that
Gave me warmth.
I awoke, except I was
still smiling.
As I laid there in wonder,
I broke into morning laughter.
t'was a vivid dawn to a simple happiness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naida Nepascua Supnet 06 July 2011

mornings like this is worth remembering, nice smile nice mood nice day ahead nice poem...

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Romeo Della Valle 04 July 2011

You made me smile also and notice with this well penned and poignant write that you got what it takes to make it through the poetry world: TALENT: 10+++ Keep inspiring the World, Love and Peace for always! ...

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 23 April 2007

Simple poem for a simple pleasure...Smiling and laughter works wonders all the time! Great dream scheme...and a pleasure to read. keep smiling Luke, ==Shelley==

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Lucas P 23 February 2007

Well as i awoke i noticed this smile on my face and i started laughing.Like i transitioned from dream to reality. :)

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David Taylor 23 February 2007

And you give the reader a smile, did you really wake or are we still dreaming?

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