Diminishing Returns Poem by Pete Crowther

Diminishing Returns

Rating: 5.0


This pretty girl has style and flair,
Will she invite me to her lair?
I swear there's something in the air.

Should I invite her for a drink,
Suggest a date at the skating rink
(For writing an ode is a waste of ink) ?

These things don't come upon a plate,
Or if they do, they come too late
Like something nasty that we ate.

So, dear friend, please do not scold -
Our warmest days give way to cold
And youth itself like love grows old.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philippa Lane 14 July 2005

Your style is simplistic, but underneath there is a real deepness of feeling that comes over so well in all your poetry. Thank you for this charming and intriguing poem.

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Linda Hepner 08 July 2005

I do like the third line of each verse!

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Uriah Hamilton 06 July 2005

I super love the end! Love and poetry can at times feel like Diminishing Returns!

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Pete Crowther

Pete Crowther

Hull, East Yorkshire, England
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