Discerning Eye Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Discerning Eye

Rating: 5.0


L-et your discerning eye
H-ave the clear sight or view;
E-verything is nice and pleasant,
N-othing will make you blue.

D-iscerning eye has seen
E-ach and every passing day;
G-lowing light in the bright sky
U-ses not the dark or gray.
Z-one of beauty and warmth
M-akes the cloud white up high;
A-ugust twenty-fifth Friday,
N-ever close your discerning eye.

Discerning Eye
Friday, August 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 August 2017

G-lowing light in the bright sky Uses not the dark or gray. Zone of beauty and warmth Makes the cloud white up high; Beautiful poem describing a pair of elegant eyes...nicely written. 10 for it. Subhas

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 August 2017

Thank you so much, Subhas.... Have a blessed moment👍👍👍

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Subic, Philippines
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