Mihaela Pirjol

Disco Ball (Haiku) - Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

fascicle of lights
fall upon the walls—I dream
of Winter’ snowflakes

Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming

Form: Haiku

Comments about Disco Ball (Haiku) by Mihaela Pirjol

  • Terry Craddock (11/19/2015 4:17:00 PM)

    Disco Lights Tumbling Upon Darkened Walls

    like disco lights
    in coloured cascades
    tumbling upon darkened walls

    my youthful mind whirls
    escapes through walls filters
    into snowflake crystals

    minds glorious globe trances
    adores filtered waxing images
    through limitless mindscapes

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Disco Ball' by Mihaela Pirjol.
    Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.
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  • Terry Craddock (11/18/2015 6:58:00 AM)

    as Disco lights, in coloured cascades, tumbling upon darkened walls, my youthful mind whirled, escaped through walls filters, into snowflake crystals, of the minds glorious trances... again I return to adore your images filtered through my mind 10+ :) (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/30/2015 12:56:00 PM)

    Superb Haiku........Great imagery and nicely thought.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 30, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 31, 2015

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