Discomfort is seen
Friday,26th October 2018.
I lose the sight of good things
my vision fails to notice good thing to bring
I fail to concentrate
and in real terms relate
Why is it so?
when some dear ones go
away from your fold
you feel being cheated and sold
nothing appeals
or feel real
not even trees
those give shade and free fruits
not moonlight
or sun rays bright
nothing works to bring you to delight
internally you feel sore and fight
The frustration is visible
and causing so much mental trouble
you remain discerned
whole of the world seems to be condemned
Hasmukh Mehta
Frustration is visible and trouble that comes is so sad. This is very amazing really. Living with the sight of the good things is definitely good in life. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.10
Losing the sight of good things is so sad. Mental trouble provokes thought. Sunlight and moonlight brings brightness. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.10
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The frustration is visible and causing so much mental trouble you remain discerned whole of the world seems to be condemned Hasmukh Mehta