Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 92,159 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Discussing Their Disgust - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

In the valleys where shadows exist,
Those who have made their choices...
Selected to pick,
Should not complain...
Of less light to find,
Upon them to shine.
When a climbing up and away,
From a darkness that delays...
Takes motivation and initiative,
With a desire to move up and towards,
The light.
To know a better life wished,
Doesnt come to anyone...
Believing that a drifting,
Back and forth in valleys...
Discussing with others their disgust,
Of it.
Will always discover discouragement,
And plenty of time to procrastinate.
To accept as an incentive.

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about Discussing Their Disgust by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/17/2016 7:34:00 AM)

    It takes motivation and initiative. Moving towards light is definitely fantastic. Amazing drafting is shared really. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 16, 2016

Poem Edited: Monday, September 26, 2016


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