Distance Poem by Abdulmalik Abdullahi Bankanu
Distance
It's thousands there
Distances really tear
Love makes me fear
Since when I can't here
Heaven I lost hear
With you I want rear
Something I can't bear
My life I can't care
My sense I left there
My most lovelier
My sheath in despair
My half of a pair
Whose sounds far in air
Pierce my heart as a spear
My one I want near
So close and so clear.
Even though the English in your poem is rough, I understood your feelings and I empathize. Peace to you, Abdulmalik
This is a poem, and I guess poetic-license still exist. I'm sorry. Anyway, I thank you for your nous!
Love makes fear in distance. But love coming closer speaks about wonderful emotion of life. Very wise sharing....10
About your note: it happens.. and life is a complicated matter.. But I'd say that you haven't found your soul mate, yet.. About your poem: I think you should try free verse. In this write, you appear to be almost 'imprisoned' in your (forced) rhymed verse.. Anyway, thanks for sharing and.. WELCOME AT POEM HUNTER, Abdulmalik Keep on writing Blessings
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Absence makes the heart grow fonder. I like the articulation of the poem. It's a beautiful love poem nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Abdullahi. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.