Disturbance Poem by Indira Renganathan

Disturbance

Rating: 5.0

a Disturbance
Trees around the pond
Eager to look at themselves
Into the clear waveless pond
Lo, a frog jumps in

b Disturbance
Trees around the pond
Eager to look at themselves
Wind helps them to bend, but lo
Pond becomes wavy

Four line Haikus

Wednesday, December 27, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: frog
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 December 2023

Wonderful haiku crafted with wit. Love it!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 December 2023

The wonderful images in the poem make me at close range with the trees around the pond and observe re: Disturbance.

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