Do not weep me
Grieving over my fall from grace
For he forgave me
And I outpaced the echoes
Of each demon's stalking stride.
Once upon a time
I shared bread he broke
And sipped wine he blessed.
A very sweet and gentle write. The meaning is so sacred and meaningful. Touching.
The poem reflects the true communion of a restless soul with the Almighty. The words are power-packed. Beautiful poem. Liked it.
The reading is not your exact words. Robot controlled. Good piece.
very well written, great piece.
Quite a riddle of salvation..wit and skill
So much expressed in so few words - a very powerful write. It succinctly expresses what Judas must have felt.
A good poem here. Well written.
This must be what Judas said. Well written.
Jesus came to earth to help us all we should all drink his wine and eat his bread Colin.thank you Alan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
I really like this one. Very heart-felt.