Within dark caverns of the mind
Fearsome creatures abide
Demons tempting with praise and bribes
Offering false hope from Hell's fires.
Do not falter nor let the spirit weaken
When walking twisting tunnels
Terrifying dark labyrinth
Fearful of hearing Satan's step.
Very Impressive, ..With every line I was drawn in to read more. good work.
Feels like I played Devil May Cry, against demon and evil... And like I read The Lord Of The Rings... It's full of neverending imagination... Coooolll... well done...! ! ! Naruezt Kaede, ,
clear imagery...perfect picture of inner fear...
In a few words you capture what's in store for the hero of the myths when he begins his life's quest.
We shall never fear of darkness for there's a light beam in our heart If the we're meant to take the trial It's time to see how strong we are.....
Vivid imagery painted on canvas of tranquility...........triumph against dark evils...spelled out like hundreds mazes.............need a peace of mind to crack the meaning beneath the caverns of mind.Excellent writes my buddy Colin.I'll read more of your powerful poetry soon.Keep up the good work! ! your new buddy, Dean Nordy, US of A.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Colin -you spread the word that evil lurks in Dark Caverns I thank you for a great write and I never did trust that devil and if I hear in in my brain I will tell him to get lost! regards Ken e