Colin Ian Jeffery

Gold Star - 5,070 Points (Redhill Hospital)

Billy - Poem by Colin Ian Jeffery

He never speaks
Trapped within a damaged brain
Body twisted, limbs trembling
Sitting in a hospital yard
Humming tunes without melody.
But in his bright soul he stands tall
Articulate with mind intact
Singing melodious songs of love
Only God and he can hear.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Billy by Colin Ian Jeffery

  • Rebecca Navarre (11/15/2017 11:02:00 PM)

    Ever So Deeply! ! ! ! ! And Beautifully Etched! ! ! ! ! Of A Ever
    So Beautiful Soul! ! ! ! ! Very Strong Powerfully Heart Felt Poem! ! ! ! !
    Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless! ! ! ! !
    Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
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  • Ashika Murali Acharya (10/30/2017 12:16:00 AM)

    The voice of the soul! Beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Rajesh Thankappan (9/8/2017 6:17:00 AM)

    An out of the box view of a soul trapped in a pitiable body. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Loza Wills (8/29/2017 3:52:00 PM)

    Love is ALL there is Beautiful Soul. You. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (7/19/2017 4:35:00 AM)

    A very poignant poem about someone confined to his hospital yard absorbed in himself. Thanks.
    @@ He never speaks /....Singing melodious songs of love / Only God and he can hear.
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  • Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (10/20/2015 3:41:00 AM)

    Very touching piece of art, of human tragedy and the hope that is ever lodged in the human heart. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2015 8:50:00 AM)

    Yes.That indeed is the greatness of soul - never dying, ever peaceful soul! A nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Michael Hagwood (5/6/2015 6:30:00 AM)

    You ask me to comment on your
    work, what you read on you tube and
    and your poem Billy, You are a very
    good writer
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  • Sudipta Bhattacharyya (5/2/2015 1:24:00 PM)

    How touchy this poem is! Hope against hope, that's all.
    Nice poem sir! !
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  • (4/30/2015 2:22:00 AM)

    Only God and he can hear.
    Well written indeed
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  • Bill Galvin (4/27/2015 11:04:00 AM)

    Thank you, Colin. My love just passed from ALS (Motor Neuron disease) , and with Billy, you capture her bright soul articulate with mind intact, though speechless, as well; and it helped me remember her smile, which she kept to the very end. It can amaze us the way some have to leave this world, but, more amazing is the courage some keep when faced with the end. (Report) Reply

  • (4/25/2015 10:32:00 AM)

    I think this is a good poem Colin. It clearly expresses something that may indeed be true of many unfortunate souls. I have a son who suffers from mental illness and I can relate to what is being expressed in this poem. Had you not contacted me I would not have taken the time to read your poetry. But I will proceed to do so beginning with this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (3/17/2015 8:55:00 PM)

    Soul remains the same, bright, pure and ever active to purify us.Loved. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (3/17/2015 5:18:00 PM)

    So very moving and So beautifully expressed. Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Elaine Sept (3/17/2015 12:20:00 PM)

    Short and succinct, and ever so powerful. Great job! (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (3/17/2015 12:02:00 PM)

    Congratulation Colin a deserving poem keep it up thank you (Report) Reply

  • (3/17/2015 11:34:00 AM)

    Very sad poem. Touching. (Report) Reply

  • (3/17/2015 11:34:00 AM)

    very sad poem...... Touching. (Report) Reply

  • (3/17/2015 8:41:00 AM)

    A song of the soul, a poem of grand human proportion. (Report) Reply

  • Brian Stafford (3/17/2015 5:54:00 AM)

    congrats on writing a excellent poem and getting poem of the day! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 23, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 17, 2015

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