Do You? Poem by Cristina Teodor

Do You?

Rating: 4.5


Do you hear the rain drops on your window?
Do you feel the wind touching your body?
Do you feel the sun smiling to your face?
Do you hear the birds singing?
Do you?
This is life going through your veins,
This is reason to be happy and fulfill.
Do you feel my love knocking by your door?
Do you want to open it?
Sometimes love knocks only one time and goes away,
But love always knocks,
And if you hear knocking,
And you opent it
There is something waiting out there,
Something that will make your heart get crazy,
Something that will turn your world upside down,
But it will be a crazy happiness,
Because at your door it will be
The meaning of your life,
Woman of your dreams,
Key of your answers,
Me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rekha Mandagere 19 March 2011

Great sentiments of love is established intelligently using lively things around us.I give full marks 10 for this soothing poem. Rekhamandagere

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Rekha Mandagere 19 March 2011

Great sentiments of love is established intelligently using lively things around us.I give full marks 10 for this soothing poem. Rekhamandagere

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MRITYUNJAY JHA 12 March 2011

Love demands TOTAL-SURRENDER TO THE EXISTENCE..one can't feel it unless one is HIGHLY RECEPTIVE..the poetess underscores the PRE-CONDITIONS essential to experience the dance and delight of love..In poetess' views it appears that LOVE MEANS EXPANDING ONE'S PERSONAL CONSCIOUSNESS AND MERGING IT WITH THE UNIVERSAL CONSCIOUSNESS...when u r not u but the whole universe, only then love happens..HEY! LOVE IS IN THE AIR..SO OPEN D WINDOW-the portals of urs being..WHEN U R IN LOVE, THE WHOLE WORLD SEEMS DANCING..when there be no dancer, only the dance remains...LOVE IS THEN-HERE AND NOW..ur best poetry.

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 11 March 2011

cristina's another gem. Love really knocks and when it knocks, we are at another plain. Our heart is full of spirits, ears full of music and we smell everything sweet. That's the magic of love. Whose door cristina is knocking is the mystery? If the intended person do not open, he is surely at a loss.

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Elena Sandu 09 March 2011

Looking outside my window I see showers of snowflakes, your poem, a dropp of spring knocking at my soul. Thank you for share,10

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