Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 464,818 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Dog Fight - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Dog fight

We are human race
That is clearly visible on face
I am clearly reflected in our action
The irritation is also seen with reaction

Not the animals alone
But we have also gone
To the extent of fighting
For grabbing the things

It is for sharing common things
That can bring
Easy spoils
From ills

We involve in dog fight
For wrong or right
Quarrel among and bark
With abusive words and start alteration

It is marred by behavior
Even though the pattern is all over
We show our greediness in open
And spoil heavenly atmosphere and turn

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  • (1/26/2016 10:30:00 PM)

    The cut throat competition and intensified struggle for existence has made human beings selfish and self centered.. The dog like fights and barking on each other is it's direct consequence, in my opinion.
    A delicate aspect of human life and psyche has been wonderfully depicted in this beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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  • Michael Walkerjohn (1/26/2016 10:29:00 PM)

    Aloha Hasmukh...

    I have a thought and more, in these moments reflecting upon your thinking man's words... 'We' are generally ruled by the quantity of things considered as important' or 'necessary'... and considering that humankind values nothing that the universe deems as such... it would appear that 'we' are doomed to suffer the most horrible of ends... ''We', ill exponentially reproduce and consume all of the total energies of this globe, as does the most virulent virus... then we will eat each other until there is no one remaining, and this marble in the vastness of this galaxy will be dead... I have taken the liberty to 'pull' a few vivid messages from this particular post...

    clearly visible
    clearly reflected
    irritation, reaction; alone
    gone, fighting, grabbing for things
    easy spoils from both wrong and right
    quarrelling, abusive, marred by greediness
    human; visible, reflecting individuals, living alone...

    something sad about discovering the innermost thoughts and messages within a work of words... or Am I just Whistling Dixie? Thank you for this very fine thought provoking post... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
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  • Gajanan Mishra (1/26/2016 9:11:00 PM)

    very beautiful sir, namaskar.. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2016 8:49:00 PM)

    It is marred by behavior
    Even though the pattern is all over
    We show our greediness in open
    And spoil heavenly atmosphere and turn
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 26, 2016

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 26, 2016

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