Domestic Shades-24 Poem by Indira Renganathan

Domestic Shades-24

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A Holiday Special

They all came on a holiday spree
We all together went on a city round up

They were all enjoying talking
Then were all set for a homam-pooja

Children were all playing on the staircase
Up and down were all for sudden clashes

All cries rose as all the smoke rose
All tears shut up all the flickering eyes

All steadied then to vent to the power-cut
All of a sudden the inverter alarmed all

All the blunder was a young one's ennui-drive
All the curious that she'd turned on my pc

All the bestest frowning was my husband
All the bestest he groped through the smoke

All ended well when the inverter was put out
All yet an irritable joke but bullied the mood

The Shastri all with his giggling teeth when cracked
'To all a Happy New Year from the inverter'

All the laughing tears flowed in all
Wishing all each other a Happy New Year

Saturday, January 2, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 January 2010

All the laughing tears flowed in all Wishing all each other a Happy New Year ALL GOOD HUMOURS ON NEW YEAR...BEAUTIFUL POEM AND NICE ONE TOO.....10 READ MINE.............. DON' BREAK UP

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Sandra Martyres 11 January 2010

A very amusing write Indira...so ideal to bring in the New Year with good cheer...Thank you for all your kind comments on my work. Warm regards and all my good wishes to you for the New Year - Sandra

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Nikunj Sharma 07 January 2010

Hillarious, comical and light hearted...good poem....please read my following request. Dear Friend Monica Monet, a talented and gifted poet, who was known to me only for last 3 months sent me an email mentioning that she was ill beyond treatment and shall pass away even before the mail is read by me. I have written a poem ' AU REVOIR ' which is a replica of her email. It is sensitive and painful, but I could not do anything better but to offer her a tribute this way. Pls read and bless her soul. Rgds Nikunj

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 04 January 2010

ENTHUSIASM OF CHILDREN..DISTURBS THE POOJA..THANK GOD THE SHASTRI HAD A SENSE OF HUMOR TO EASE IT OUT...LOVELY POETIC CONVERSION OF AN INCIDENT

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