Don'T Dare Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

Don'T Dare

Rating: 4.1


Don't say you love me
for I know it's not true.

Don't tell you need me
for I know it's not right.

Don't bother to call me
if you will just tell a lie.

Don't try to see me
if you will just say goodbye.

Don't dare to love me
and hurt me in the end.


18th May 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 29 June 2009

sorrowful indeed when people love and say unexpected goodbye in the end! 10+ for this nice piece!

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Ted M 28 June 2009

so much of simplicity in your writings. for that 10+++ Cheer up! ! U R poems reflect the hurt feelings.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 June 2009

Both the form and content of this piece is common. Lovely write.

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Afzal Shauq 24 June 2009

Don't try to see me if you wil just say goodbye. Don't dare to love me and hurt me in the end. sweet verses... poem written in heart broken but very emoionla way..liked it..and you seem to be poetess of love and reality..well done friend..10++++++++

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Ency Bearis 21 June 2009

well no matter what they say this a nice self contemplation and expressed well in my opinion...so I cannot rate this as 5...and I definitely rate this as 10..

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