Don'T Forget Your Promise! Poem by Ellias Anderson Jr.

Don'T Forget Your Promise!



It's true that black crows are ugly and their sound isn't good
It's true that black crows are the neighbors of the black woods

In winter they are cold and they cough,
But they are loyal to the barren and cold boughs

Hear ye all and for the God's sake,
What is this empty black lake?

It’s a Godhood when we promise
But beware to no miss,

Beware to not loss,
And beware of the holy fuss

We should be loyal to our own words
It’s the time that we can make a better world

Be powerful to your promises, as warm as sun,
Try hard to make your promise real and done

Promises make the feel of trust
And sometimes they let us down in front of the gust

Promises are the keys to happy emotions,
They will make a big super happy portion

As joyful as the childhood flip-flop
Cheer to people who are loyal to their promises, they are at the top

As joyful as the ending of the childhood homework
Cheer to people who are loyal to their promises as powerful as the corks

Breaking the promises is so awful like a spoiled meat
Act to your promise and don't sit!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
we are responsible for our promises to our friends and family.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nader Baheri 29 June 2013

wonderful written.promises are like a mirrors.whenever they break we may fix them but the cracks are still remained on them.

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Captain Cur 21 June 2013

Very well spoken and truthful write. Promises are easy to make, easy to break but very difficult to keep.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 June 2013

act to your promise, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

Ellias Anderson Jr.

Iran, Islamic republic of
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