Don'T Go Poem by Annabel Cruz

Don'T Go

Rating: 5.0


Don't go.....
The day is young
You've only just begun
To fly
The air is fresh
The fields are green
The birds are singing in the sky
It's spring again
This is no time
To die
Don't go....
The day is young
You still have much 
To give
the sun is bright
The sky is clear
This is another day to live
Reach out your hands
For God is near
This is a time
To pray

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 14 March 2012

I notice how all the lines balance one another, and there is a great harmony and peacefulness upon reading them. Also there is a yearning, a sincere emotional plea, embedded throughout.

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Juan Olivarez 29 February 2012

Well done Anabel very good piece. I was glad to hear from you again.

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Rajendran Muthiah 26 February 2012

Excellent poem to linger long in memory with its melancholy emotions flooding the heart.

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