The boy was telling the young girl -
"Pull your skirt a little up
So that I Canpush itin".
The girl looked andreplied the boy -
"Wait till I pull it up
Then you can push that in".
You all are thinking it's a sheer nuisance
What audacity I do have to write this slang
But no - believe me -
This was a reality,
I heard thisdialogue
In a crowded train.
The boy was with a luggage there
To put it under the bench
Where the girl was sitting over the bench
With her long skirt touching the floor.
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Amitava (22.03.2014)
(continued) ................YES, fun indeed! ! ! i mean these lines, which made me laugh LOUDLY: [by the way, you DID fool me! ] The boy was with a luggage there To put it under the bench .....................i may put this into a showcase. i'll definitely put it into MyPoemList. bri :)
here i'd only put two, not three, s s into Misunderstand. :) and if you want to change Don'T to Don't, in the title, just leaving a space between the apostrophe and the t works for me i think; the same has happened to me i some titles. (to be continued) .............
Very intelligent presentation - it clearly shows that how often things are misunderstood.
This poem is a classic! So expertly depicting an actual conversation and ensuing actuality of what was really happening. Loved it, made me laugh out loud! Read it to my husband, he also laughed and enjoyed it immensely. Great poem, Amitava! RoseAnn
Funny how the ears are trained to hear what the eyes do not actually see....Thanks for pointing us in the proper direction....PEACE
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very smart! Goes to show how easily things can be taken out of context! Nicely done!