Saturday, April 6, 2024

Don't Let Go... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't slip away, come what the
tides may. Even if the waves crash
over top. Don't ever give up, don't
stop. Grab onto that branch! .. For
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Rebecca Navarre
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Anjandev Roy 07 April 2024

This is a superb piece...... thanks for sharing....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 07 April 2024

Sandra would be proud Bravo Rebecca TFS

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 April 2024

TOP Marks 5 Stars all. This is such a fantastic poem, myriad Stars I get for you from the Galaxy

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 April 2024

TWO: How must his parents feel at that moment? Indeed, dear Becca, NEVER give up!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 April 2024

A very sad poem about the late Braydon, who slipped away, tears are flowing down my cheeks, how very trafgic is this!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 April 2024

Absolutely! Don't ever give up, don't stop. Grab onto that branch! ..

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