Eugene Levich


Dorothy - Poem by Eugene Levich

It’s 27th February
Her birthday
How she fills my memory
And my heart
Not just today
But every day.

She walks along the avenue
In that city - heavenly for me,
As long as she was with me,
So long ago in my memory.

She walks gracefully
Like a gazelle,
Vulnerable,
But also a panther,
Seeking,
A huntress
So filled with beauty.

Today is 27th February
Her birthday...

Dorothy

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Dorothy by Eugene Levich

  • Eugene Levich (3/22/2017 8:13:00 PM)


    Your comment on my commas is highly commendable! Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Bri Edwards (3/22/2017 7:58:00 PM)


    How important a little comma can be! you DO use a comma after and before Seeking. good for you!

    bri ;)
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  • Bri Edwards (3/16/2014 3:33:00 PM)


    Eugene,

    i guess i can find nothing to not like in this poem. except that i have had no one in MY life (so far) for whom i can say i've had the same feeling(s) . lucky you, even though she is absent, physically, now...............assuming this is actually about a loved one in your life, and not a well-imagined story. i'm glad you didn't say i miss her so, 'cause then the poem would contain a little sadness; we don't need THAT! a memory is ok, especially when it is so wonderful.
    a wife? care to tell me? thanks for sharing. bri :)

    i especially enjoyed:

    She walks gracefully
    Like a gazelle,
    Vulnerable,
    But also a panther,
    Seeking,
    A huntress
    So filled with beauty. .........................thanks for the punctuation, which helps us readers.
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  • (3/14/2014 4:34:00 PM)


    How lovely. She must have been very special in your life. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 14, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 20, 2014


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