Douglas Scotney

Gold Star - 38,978 Points (boomer / Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide)

Dorothy's Response - Poem by Douglas Scotney

There is an eminence amongst our hills.
There is a deep quiet in its height.
A man I love of lofty mind
Shares with that mount its quiet.

I admire the quiet.
I seem to require it,
Though it limpens his love for me.

If I wasn't so dotty
Instead of 'YOUR EMINENCE'
I'd have called it 'MOUNT DOROTHY'.

Comments about Dorothy's Response by Douglas Scotney

  • (3/18/2012 8:03:00 AM)

    Witty, great work. This Dorothy sounds like a dinosaur! (Report) Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (3/16/2012 10:10:00 PM)

    A very well penned and poignant poem that clearly shows your potential in the Poetry World! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

  • Raj Arumugam (2/8/2012 2:37:00 PM)

    little anecdotes that are made into gems of poems, Douglas...great work (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (1/27/2012 3:00:00 AM)

    a good name and a good poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 26, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 7, 2012

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