remember our fog walk
of a winter morning...?
our hands closely clasped
spreading warmth into each other
we took each step together
into a zero visibility ahead
whenever a sudden wind
blew on our winter-bitten cheeks
didn't the clasp tighten?
how our fingers released
stars shining brighter
than those up above!
we took each step
with those stars guiding us...
* for karin anderson...thnq so much for suggesting a sequel. i lived each word that went into this...
10nov2009
12.24hrs
Nicely done. Liked these lines ........................................... we took each step with those stars guiding us... ...........................................
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
what a beautfiful breathtaking memory....and as I can see from the earlier poem, the feeling of warmth has carried you through cold days.....