Dream Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Dream

Rating: 5.0


On the banks of
Streams of the mountain-
In the morning or the evening
What is so intimate
And Craving for me,
And fills so much craziness...

That's the dream,
Young and Nascent,
Tender and pleasant,
Touches the core of me
Secretly, in those moments
Of torturing silence and hollowness.

Saturday, April 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,heart song,secret,silence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Secretly in those moments of torturing silence and hollowness prettier words of thoughts.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 26 May 2018

Thank you dear Neetu for your kind response.

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Anita Aparajita Das 26 January 2018

Tender and pleasant, Touches the core of me Secretly, in those moments Of torturing silence and hollowness. A very beautiful poem with a vivid description on dream. Thanks for the sharing.10+ for it.

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Thank you dear Neetu for the warm words of encouragement.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 08 September 2016

That's the dream, Young and Nascent, Tender and pleasant, Touches the core of me Secretly, in those moments Of torturing silence and hollowness. A very beautiful poem with a vivid description on dream. Thanks for the sharing.10+ for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 December 2017

Thank you dear Rini for visiting the poem and the nice warm remarks.

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Young and nascent, Tender and plaseant. Nice to express. Thank you

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 December 2017

Thank you sir for visiting the poem and the nice warm remarks.Subhas

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Anita Aparajita Das 29 May 2016

That's the dream, Young and Nascent, Tender and pleasant, Touches the core of me Secretly, in those moments Of torturing silence and hollowness. It is a real dream to read a poem of this kind. Thanks Subhas for sharing it

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 December 2017

Thank you Neetu for visiting the poem and the nice warm remarks.

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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