Dream, Ambition Poem by Max Reif

Dream, Ambition

Rating: 5.0


I long to walk the world
without a single care,
down every street in innocence,
entranced by ordinary miracles —

spring blossoms on the trees,
the dead lead skies'
life-giving rain,

and by the enigmatic street itself,
this trance of street
awaiting every passerby,

each one trailing the mystery:
where have we come from,
where are we, where
are we going?

I'd graze and drink
like an animal
without reflective memory,

and live within the world,
a visitor
on an aesthetic mission —

to contemplate all that I see,
refining, tamping down, until

I'm left with but
an essence — joy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Max Reif 19 March 2007

this one's edited from Saturday, when it had these 2 comments: Amanda Lukas (3/17/2007 2: 42: 00 PM) The metaphoric contrast of life and death here is quite well done: ..'and dead lead skies that send life-giving rain...' A fabulous work, Max. Thank you. Anna Russell (3/17/2007 2: 20: 00 PM) A swirling, hope-filled write. Lovely. Hugs Anna xxx

0 0 Reply

Breathing in and distilling the wonders of the everyday world into oneself is a part of the essence of happiness indeed.... a calming, thought-provoking piece to read - love it Max. t x

0 0 Reply
Scarlett Treat 19 March 2007

I, too, long for those new old streets, wishing to walk down them as well, and find an adventure or to, or a miracle of something unexpected that I just know is waiting there for me...Beautiful essence of joy..Thanks, Max! !

0 0 Reply
Ronald Stroman 19 March 2007

..........................unquestionably poetic.

0 0 Reply
Melanie Emiko 19 March 2007

I agree with you Max. Very well written with a message of undying significance. And though it is supposed to be as simple as caring for nothing, to vacate the mind...it is usually the hardest ambition. ~_~

0 0 Reply
Raynette Eitel 19 March 2007

I like your dream, Max, especially 'refining, tamping down...' and the essence of joy at last. We all need to remember to do that. Raynette

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Max Reif

Max Reif

OVER 400 POEMS SERVED! !
Close
Error Success