Somnolent screenplay
rehearsal for waking life -
Pre-reality
Thoughts in utero
waiting for delivery
to the outside world
Subconscious scanning
vivid life inside the mind -
Creative planning
Original thought provoking poem. I suppose at an elemental level a new life in the womb is completely in touch with contentment and yet senses that there is another part of mother awaiting outside the womb to cradle baby with her arms.
Midnight...You 'KU it just right....' Tis a lovely write...''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR
Love this Dream KU. Fascinating images expertly rendered love Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
It's like another life in there, another world. Like especially the birthing metaphor. Highly compressed, crisp and poetic delivery of these ideas Linda. xx
Very imagistic and well structured. The mind set applies to so many situation where action will follow in due time.
The embers of thought burning slow and in tune with life Thankyou love duncan X
Ku-dos for these haiku! I shall certainly raise a mug of can't miss ku-miss to the ku-ragious effort put forth by Ms. Ori. All right, that's enough of the punning around for now. GWG
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thoughts in utero...... hmmmmm Linda... it amazes.... your mind.... the odes and sonnets that you delivered... indeedly vivid!