Dream On Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Dream On

Rating: 5.0


Dream on, dearie,
deep in pillow.
Your ever knit brow
is slackened now.

In lifes escapement
take ones time.
Carry its silence
with unsung rhyme.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Halls 06 August 2013

You have that knack Sally of putting a story into just a few verses. You show that a few lines is all you need!

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Sally P. P. 04 June 2020

Thankyou, Kabul. Your comment is very much appreciated. x

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 April 2009

Dream on, dearie, deep in pillow. Your ever knit brow is slackened now......................dreaming should be never slackened..........neither brow that does the dreaming............Good Write..........

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Sally P. P. 04 June 2020

Perhaps... relaxed would be the appropiate word, Thanks for your input. Sally.

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Muhammad Ali 05 April 2009

Dear dreams Dream on it is the life hmmmmmmm something different friend 10

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Sally P. P. 04 June 2020

Thanks for your comment, Mo. xx

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Pablo Cruise 03 April 2009

I absolutely love this, Sally. The pillow is close, dearie

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Sally P. P. 04 June 2020

Lovely to connect with you, Pablo. Thanks.

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Mark R Slaughter 29 March 2009

Thank you - yes I feel much calmer from all that Work Sleep Work..

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Sally P. P. 04 June 2020

Hi, Mark. Nice to hear from you. Thanks.

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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