Dreams Poem by Yulissa Fregoso

Dreams

Rating: 5.0


As a little girl my pearnts allways said follow your dreams.
But as I grew up I realized that following dreams was one
of the hardest things ever.
Anyways I was not giving up my dreams were going to come ture
DREAMS

When I went to school they asked me what I wanted to do as I
grew up and I said I want to follow my dreams they looked comfused and said you dont get it and i said you dont get life
Dreams

Work hard dont let NOBODY get in your way
Dreams are Dreams make them come true

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 December 2009

You have written a wonderful poem, Yulissa. The last line is really essence of the poem and a course of action for life. Keep following your dreams. Best Wishes. Naseer

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John Knight 07 November 2009

Hi Yulissa Angel This is a lovely poem and I am honoured to be the first to comment and the first to score. I give it TEN as an encouragement to follow your dream to be a POET! Always be prepared to have aims and goals and dreams to follow. If you aim high you might at least hit the MIDDLE if you aim low you will achieve NOTHING. You live in the DREAM State (California) in what for many is the dream Country (USA) so you have a head start over many of your 'sisters' of which many of your age in the 'Third World' have to work hard for 12 hours a day just to survive. Yulissa if you 'Follow Your Dreams' and work hard you can do ANYTHING! Love in Poetry - JOHN.

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