Friends Poem by Yulissa Fregoso

Friends

Rating: 5.0
 


The only thing that every girl needs is friends to keep her smiling when every thing brings her down to to be there when shes falling down to be there to pick her right up and just say sa 'Did you know I'll always be here for you' then she smiles and you now that that smile meant so much that is why god created friends.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 06 September 2010

sweet write in your little age..great.it means you are quite talented..thanks for sharing your words

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bye bye... bye bye 27 October 2009

Yes, that´s what friends are for, Yulissa! Very nice writing!

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Patti Masterman 25 October 2009

Nice style and lots of understanding. Thanks Yulissa.

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Afzal Shauq 24 October 2009

impressive piece of writing...meaningful..10/10

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John Knight 24 October 2009

Hi Yulissa - This is a lovely PROSE POEM and it expresses the importance of FRIENDS in a very fragrant way. Your ending is a wonderful revelation for one so young - probably because you are a Clever California Girl! I score your Poem - TEN. Love in poetry - JOHN

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