Tears Poem by Yulissa Fregoso

Tears

Rating: 5.0


As I smiled you tried to ignore it becuse our love is forbiden.
Everybody called us stupid becuase we were so you and
you are older but when I look away my heart stops and then........
TEARS

From our first kiss to our last I knew you where the one.
Sometimes I pretended not to care about you but pain would eat me alive cant take it no more why did it have to end
TEARS

I would try not to think about you.
But it Never worked why were you so important
Could god ever help me with this pain maybe but I still have TEAARs in my soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 November 2009

would try not to think about you. But it Never worked why were you so important Could god ever help me with this pain maybe but I still have TEAARs in my soul. hold your teasrs becauethey are more important than your love..ifthey are dropped then itmay bringdiscredit to your love.... lovely poem der tksfor sharingwith me.......10 read mine... cry not.. a plaace called home

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John Knight 14 November 2009

Hi Yulissa Angel - If two people really love each other - their love is always pure. You know the reality of love from the first kiss - but with the pleasure of loving - there is even more pain at parting. Everyone we fall in love with (and there are many dozens in a lifetime) is IMPORTANT - some much much more important than others as you are already discovering. God is always by our side to help through our 'love crisises' but 'soul tears' go very very deep. A love poem full of joys and pains of love. I have scored it TEN. Love you in Poetry - JOHN

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Ying Escalona 10 November 2009

nie poem..but let the tears flow..it will stop by itself anyway

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