Dreamscapes Poem by Rafique Farooqi

Dreamscapes

Rating: 4.6


Like pink and white clouds,
in fluttering winds,
she waved her hands,
and smiled merrily,
after clloying talk,
her GRACE and flair eluded my mind,
there was something effervescent, about her,
some spark of mischief,
lurking in her gaze,
a bright inner elan,
it was to waft away my glooms,
and sad mists,
that clung over the mountains, of shadows,
and behind that at whiles,
huge smokes to arise,
and hovered into upper winds.

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Like pink and white clouds, in fluttering winds, she waved her hands, and smiled merrily, ....... very good dreamscapes..... i loved it. read mine 'All dreams not come true' ondifferent lines

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Tai Chi Italy 12 December 2009

Simply gorgeous work Rafique, you describe her with such gentle feelings of touch. Smiling at you Tai

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Rehana Nazli 12 August 2009

Dream catcher you are!

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Lady Grace 01 August 2009

beautiful and expressive..

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excellent sweet poem..enjoyed it

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 June 2009

Ammmmmazing dreamscapes........fine words chosen! 10+

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Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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