* Moon & Star Poem by Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur

* Moon & Star

Rating: 2.8
 


Moon and star,
are closer,
Is ocean,
Turbulent,
Is moon pulling sea waves,
I hope so,
Weathers are predator,
Breaking the silence,
Waves are pouring,
Gems and stones,
Out of sea,
Wait for morning,
And singing breeze

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 10 September 2009

Fine images here in this fantastic short poem! 10+

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Lady Grace 10 September 2009

moon and stars are necklaces beyond the control of the creator...this is compared to downearth as ocean act as predator..this poem of yours is nice..

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Rehana Nazli 19 September 2009

Moon and star, are closer, Is ocean, Turbulent, Is moon pulling sea waves, A natural eco cycle that controls the world to run smooth..a beautiful metaphor for life's changing events in the circle of life.

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Afzal Shauq 20 September 2009

I hope so, Weathers are predator, Breaking the silence, Waves are pouring, Gems and stones, Out of sea, Wait for morning, And singing breeze wow great task and I really agree with rehana.. but if try to perceive the idea, I am sure we may find all the same echo circle you expressed in the poem..really well done, romantic, sweet, and meaningful... liked it...well done friend and thansk for your sweet words for me too...

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John Tiong Chunghoo 21 September 2009

there are seeds of greatness in your work. work to get the gems and diamonds out in order. tq

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 February 2015

I luv the moon so i enjoyd the way u portrayed the imagery. Written in a nature's charming style. So nice to read u again sir.

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 28 November 2009

Great use of language once again, well done

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Yelena M. 02 October 2009

A beautiful expression of unity and Oneness in nature. A gem of the poem, thanks for sharing with us. Yelena M.

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Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate 22 September 2009

a lovely poem with beautiful images..i enjoyed it

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Kesav Easwaran 22 September 2009

from moon and stars to waves and to the gems they pour on...a lot is there to understand when you say wait in the breeze...good work...creative...10

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Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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