Drink With Me. Poem by Fay Slimm

Fay, It's very nice...10... All best, Tsira

a very captivating verses....awesome poem...10

Fay's work, LOVELY! 10.. Ali

Wonderful dreamy write Fay....gorgeous phrasing...Fi 10++

will drink with thee, ! I will taste the nectar of your being i can see your sun arising, i see your reflection in the stream i catch your thoughts and taste them, just like the moon above but most of all my dear, from you you utter love!

This is a marvelous poem. Here inn the autumn dawn, the environment is so cool that the sun burnishes it’s essence on soft keys. Anyone if drink that situation he will be simple again. This is the core idea, the message of this magnificent poem. Imageries used in this charming poem are excellent. We can get the taste of that autumn dawn’s environment easily even if we close our eyes. This is another aspect of this poem. The message and the pictorial attribute have added an excellent value to this poem. I am delighted give my full 10.

Nature is much more intoxicating giving ever lasting joy. CP

nice piece to drink Fay! two thumbs up!

simply beautiful, smooches heart of reader, flow ingenious across passion,10++, thanks for sharing

so coool...nature poems always relaxes my mind thanks...with love shan 10+++