Drip Drop Poem by Aufie Zophy

Drip Drop

Rating: 5.0


Drip drop, tic tock, another drop falls down.
Yet another drop of kindness enters our heart
A drop of wisdom, a drop of love
The drops keep falling from above

If we don't share these drops
to extinguish the flames of greed,
soon we may be drowning
soon we may be burning

Saturday, May 18, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: kindness,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
If we do not start to share the love in our heart to extinguish the flames of greed we may soon drown and burn
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 20 May 2019

So simple and still so sound. A poem with a message worth contemplating on. Well done.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 May 2019

DRIP DRIP DROP DROP DEW DEW AND BE A LOVELY POET LIKE YOU but one needs to be WORLD RATED POET To understand poet sir YOU who can you ever forget beautiful poem of a WORLD CLASS POET do read my poem MOM'S SMILES AND MOTHERS DAY TODAY AND RV IN HEAVEN YOU MAY if time have uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

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Wonderful poem with a wonderful message. Great imagery. Beautifully crafted write.

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