Dónall Dempsey

Veteran Poet - 1,546 Points (15/07/56 / Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.)

' ' ' ' ' Dutch Disco Disaster - A Tanka - Poem by Dónall Dempsey


Screams: “What is your name! ”
“DÓ-NALL! ” I scream back. She, stares...
Slaps my face. HARD!

Storms off! Guess my name must mean
Something obscene...in Dutch.


Simply stunning blonde
squeezed into too tight tee-shirt
with Rod Stewart’s face.

His eyes sit – one on each tit.
A greatly distorted twit!

Comments about ' ' ' ' ' Dutch Disco Disaster - A Tanka by Dónall Dempsey

  • (6/18/2009 10:07:00 AM)

    I think she must have misheard you Donall lol...great write though...10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Sandra Martyres (6/18/2009 9:06:00 AM)

    Nice tankas - very amusing indeed (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, August 31, 2009

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