Dying Inside Poem by Vincent Toll

Dying Inside

Rating: 5.0


Intense emotions building up,
Ready to break free.
Unleashing the Darkness,
Building up inside.

Loneliness and Pain Overwhelms the body.
Tears of Blood begin to flow,
The body begins to shake rapidly,
As I relive every Dark Moment from the Past.

My life is almost over.
These Demons inside,
Are slowly Killing Me.

There is no point of,
Living without Happiness,
Knowing your Life is Meaningless.

No reason to fight it,
A life like this is pointless,
It’s time to accept my fate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
sky dreams 16 April 2009

this is one of those types of poems that sucks the reader in.. awesome choice of words.. i like this poem a lot

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There is no point of, Living without Happiness, Knowing your Life is Meaningless. i used to feel like that.... but im immune to it all now. nice write

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Oluko George 16 March 2009

Nice poem.....no need to pile your heart, cry it out!

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Angel Smith 16 December 2008

Toll whats up buddy? lol its angel, well duh you can read that from my poet name lol so this is a good poem and i really like it =)

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** ** 16 December 2008

really i loved this poem... waiting ur second one: p

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