Dystopic Poem by Glen Kappy

Dystopic

Rating: 5.0


from 'While Passing Through'/Summer

Leaving the ball park
crowd on sidewalk walks trance-like
focused on cell phones.

Saturday, October 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: baseball,city,crowd,electronics,human condition,people,summer,summer time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Van Der Hart 05 February 2017

Oh yeah - sharing the score? Public transport, bus stops - it's pandemic and people don't know what to do with their hands or eyes if they don't have their phones. It would be interesting to see a study or film on the overall effect of cell phnes on our lives. It's the revolution of the 21st century.

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Glen Kappy 05 February 2017

pandemic is an excellent way to dub it... last night as we drove, two people crossed the street in front of us, heedless of traffic, one mesmerized by the cell phone held out in front of her. -glen

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Rajnish Manga 23 October 2016

It is indeed sad and a great disadvantage of these gadgets that we miss out on the glimpses of nature which are awesomely enchanting and which greatly add to our enjoyment of life. Thanks.

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Rajnish Manga 22 October 2016

The poet has drawn our attention to a situation that is funny as well as worrisome in the modern context. We can see such people in any township. Nicely depicted. Thank You, Glen.

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Glen Kappy 22 October 2016

rajnish, thank you for your affirmation and for taking the time to comment. to me (i don't own a cell phone, but my wife loves her i-phone) it was a truly strange sight. i am convinced we were created to be close to nature, that we need to take in nature's sights, hear crickets and birds, smell pine trees and flowers... but for so many in my orbit, electronics keep them from experiencing these things. -glen kappy

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